22.10.09

Tear shaped Ocean

L
OV
E,L
UST,
LOSS,
LOST,L
IFE,LAB
OR,LABRY
INTH,LACER
ATE,LACUNA,
LAMENT,LAUGH
,LEAVE,LEMON-SW
EET,LEMON-BITTER,
LILY-OF-THE-VALLEY,
LEPRECHAUN-GOLD,LIB
ERATION,LIGHT,LAMP,
LEVITATE,LIMITLESS,
LIMERICK,LUMINOU
S,LONELY,LOVEL
Y,LOFTY,LO
NGING




8 comments:

  1. I didn't like this piece, I was expecting something else.

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  2. Every piece written or created is not related to the writer's personal diary. When we talk of 'Art for art's sake' things might be unexpected. But thanks for 'expecting', reading and not liking :). Could I know your name?

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  3. First of all, I'm not discussing any personal matters. We are talking about unexpected things here, not the mundane ones.
    This is what I'm expecting; I'd liked your earlier posts, where people are bound to think. I think you should more concentrate on the writing and not the emotions. If we write well, there will be feelings everywhere. People might say that a master piece is the one which comes right from the heart, but we have to write keeping our heart in control and mind out here.

    Look out for my comments.
    Amit

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  4. well...thanks and do keep posting your comments.

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  5. Seriously didn't get the meaning of your post... explain it to me when u get time

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  6. every piece is not meant to be a master piece I guess.... sometimes its just about experimenting and still taking the reader to a completely next level :)

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  7. Every piece is master piece in it's own, what do you say about the rough work that a painter or any other artist do. If you study those carefully, you can find every bit of the " master piece". What I'm here to tell, that the piece which Shaily has written is good, but you have to be focussed for the "masterpiece", and it's about expectations for the masterpiece. Looking forward for it!!!!

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  8. Exactly.... thts wat i meant.... to each his own, wat i like doesnt mean evry1 wud lik... so chill dude, my comments were for sim di and not for crossing u... and i wud love to read wat u write.. really... now i m waiting to see ur posts, if any...

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